What is the most challenging part of writing an essay for you? Is it brainstorming, organizing ideas, writing a strong thesis, or something else? How do you plan to overcome this challenge?

For me I don't like trying to get everything I need into the way it's supposed to go. I don't like the format of an essay. Thesis/introduction, then a whole bunch of body paragraphs with evidence and reasoning, then conclusions. I don't like to think of all that when writing, I'm more of a write down everything at once kinda guy. I plan to plot out everything before I start writing, so I'll know where to include things when I need to include them.

Today we finished up our practice body paragraph for the rhetorical analysis essay.

I felt good completing the body paragraph, and think I did well on it. Hopefully can improve on it in the future.

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