Describe a real moment in your life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story. Tell what happened, and why it felt like a turning point in your life?

When I went to Europe in the summer of 2024, I played golf for the 1st time. I didn't play well at all but I fell in love. The views over there, and the whole experience was so special that I wanted to continue back home. So that's what I did. It really was a turning point in my life, going away from my childhood sport of baseball, and transitioning to golf.

Today we practiced writing half of our rhetorical analysis essay body paragraphs.

I learned the format to writing a body paragraph.

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